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Nicetown Revisited by !NDean:iconNDean:



Her flavour was strawberry, but her lips tasted of pineapple... and I stared into her peachblossom eyes because I knew she would be looking into my avocado, eggshell dunes.
When I say avocado, I don't mean that pleasant fleshy tone; I mean that dark green skin that makes your pupils seem white.
Outside the neon glow of the 9:11 bar sat the cold afterglow of dawn.
I kissed her again and ignored her fading smile.

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Below me are the streets of old. They are the remnants of a more daunting era for the television had only just begun to scream and global warming was barely a candle flicker.
Industrial Revolution - me in the middle. My arm, of cogs and wheels, seemed irrelavant compared to the clockwork wonderments now policing the streets.

Well, that was Nicetown... and now I'm back below the clouds that flourish pink.
©2008-2010 !NDean
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Author's Comments

I have no idea what this is about.

The full title is: Nicetown Revisited: A Psychological Excursion

It was going to be another big project for Spectacle about a selection of individuals living in the badly named Nicetown but.. well... it needs serious work.

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:iconmintyfreshnoodlebox:
very thought provoking, but yeah.....If my primary school teacher saw this.....and noticed it had the word "nice" in it, she'd throw a hissy fit XD

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irn bru, made from girders!
:iconndean:
I know. Hence you use it as often as you can

Like in art, use tonnes of black

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:iconseren-yn-y-nos:
i like this... a lot...

i wonder if someone really tasted of pineapple... would you be tempted to eat them? or perhaps put them on a pizza with ham.... mmmm :chew:

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Childishness is the equivalent of not losing your sense of humour
:iconndean:
lmao... yes, thats how it works *pats head*

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:iconseren-yn-y-nos:
daww :blushes:

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Childishness is the equivalent of not losing your sense of humour
:iconfiction-freak:
"And ignored her fading smile."
I like that line! Says a lot about a character.

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A little more chlorine in the Gene Pool please! :B

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:iconndean:
thank you very much

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:iconndean:
lol

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